Chapter 1
Chapter 1
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Elliot Ward paused at the end of the uneven garden path, just before the narrow stretch that cut through the barely kept lawn and stared up at the house that was supposed to be his fresh start. Number 12B leaned slightly to the left, the kind of lean that suggested not structural failure, but exhaustion, as though the building had been holding itself upright for far longer than anyone had asked it to. The brickwork was weathered in that soft, sullen way old houses develop, mottled with patches of moss and the faint ghosts of long-evaporated rainwater.
Its upstairs windows reflected nothing but the flat winter-grey sky, blank and matte like old glass that had given up trying to mirror anything back. The curtains behind them hung still. No silhouettes shifted. No movement suggested life inside.
It wasn’t the worst place Elliot had ever lived. Not by a long shot. But something about its stillness, it’s held breath, made him hesitate. A sensation like stepping onto the stage of a play already in progress, unsure of his lines.
He took a long breath, rolled his shoulders, and climbed the two concrete steps to press the doorbell.
The chime inside sounded distant, muffled, as though swallowed by thick walls.
A few seconds passed before the door opened.
Mr Caldwell filled the doorway exactly as he had in the brief video call when Elliot agreed to take the room: grey hair slicked back, deep frown line carved between his brows, a tweed jacket that sagged too loose at the shoulders. Up close, Elliot realised it wasn’t simply an unfashionable cut, Caldwell looked as though he had lost weight rapidly and recently.
“Elliot, yes?” he said, already stepping aside before Elliot could answer. “Come in, come in. I’m in a bit of a rush.”
He stepped aside with a haste that bordered on impatience. Elliot pulled his suitcases inside, the wheels bumping over the threshold, and the landlord shut the door behind him with brisk, practised movements.
The entryway smelled faintly of old wood, laundry powder, and something Elliot couldn’t quite place, not unpleasant, but out of time, like the scent of forgotten paper in a long-closed trunk. No voices drifted from upstairs, no laughter from the lounge, no clatter of someone making tea even though five other people supposedly lived here.
Caldwell strode down the hallway at a pace that suggested Elliot should already know the layout.
“Ground floor’s all communal,” he said, gesturing as he moved. “Kitchen there. Dining room beside it. Lounge at the end. Toilet up on the left. Use any of it — just clean up after yourself.”
His gestures were quick, flicking across doorways framed in faded red and pus-yellow striped wallpaper. The patterns were warped in places, blistered in others, as though generations of tenants had brushed past the walls until the very colour shifted.
Elliot nodded mutely, though Caldwell wasn’t looking at him.
The man only paused once; halfway up the stairs. He turned his head just enough to toss a remark over his shoulder.
“Room 2 is occupied by someone who likes their peace and quiet. Do try to be quiet while passing.”
Then he carried on climbing, as if that explained everything.
Elliot frowned. A dozen questions stirred, but Caldwell wasn’t the type to invite them. He tightened his grip on the rickety banister with one hand and lugged his suitcase with the other, the steps complaining under each footfall.
The first-floor landing was narrow, squeezed between two doors on the right and one on the left. All three were closed. No light spilled from beneath them. No sound leaked through. The floorboards gave a subtle groan beneath Caldwell’s weight, but not Elliot’s, as if the house judged the difference.
“Your room is on the next floor,” Caldwell said as they reached the second landing. “Number 5.”
He stopped outside a plain white door with a tarnished brass number plate. The hallway light above them flickered once, twice, then steadied, leaving Elliot wondering whether it was simply the bulb or something about the house itself protesting his arrival.
Caldwell pressed a key into Elliot’s palm. It was cold. Heavier than it needed to be.
“Welcome to the house,” he said, though there was no warmth, only the hollow shape of the phrase, like a door slammed in reverse.
Before Elliot could ask anything about bins, heating schedule, where the nearest shop was, Caldwell was already descending the stairs again. His footsteps thudded quickly, decisively, as though retreating.
“Thanks,” Elliot called softly after him.
But his voice bounced from wall to wall unanswered. By the time Elliot leaned over the banister, Caldwell was already at the front door, keys in hand, shoulders hunched as though eager to escape.
The door clicked shut a heartbeat later, leaving Elliot alone on the landing with nothing but the creak of old floorboards and a quiet that felt slightly heavier than a quiet should.
Elliot turned the key in the lock, half expecting it to stick; the house looked old enough that nothing should have worked on the first try. But the mechanism clicked smoothly, and the door swung inward with a soft groan, as though it hadn’t been opened in a while.
Room 5 was smaller than the photos had suggested, but in a comforting, lived-in way. It was roughly rectangular, thought the sharply sloping ceiling on the left gave it an almost triangular tension, as if the house had been squeezed into shape. A single skylit window punctured the far wall, throwing a block of afternoon light onto the pale wooden floorboards scuffed by years of tenants dragging furniture across them. The walls were painted a soft off-white that had mellowed into a faint ivory with age, the kind that absorbed light instead of reflecting it. There was a faint smell of laundry powder and old pine, the sort of scent that clung to spaces used often but cleaned infrequently.
A narrow wardrobe stood in the back-right corner, leaning ever so slightly towards the door. Opposite it, beneath the window, sat a small chest of drawers with mismatched wooden knobs. The bed took up most of the right-hand side of the room, its metal frame low and slightly crooked, one leg supported by a folded piece of carboard. Despite that, the duvet folded at its foot make the bed look inviting in a way only well-used furniture could.
Elliot stepped inside and let the door fall shut behind him with a soft click. He set his suitcases down in the pool of light beneath the window and exhaled slowly. The air felt warm, a little duty, but welcoming in a way that briefly settled the tightening coil in his stomach. For the first time since arriving int own, he felt a little flicker of relief.
He unzipped the first suitcase and began unpacking. Clothes came out in loosely folded stacks. Worn t-shirts, two jumpers, a jacket he’d convinced himself he needed, and jeans that were starting to fray at the hems. He hung a few things in the wardrobe, testing the rail and finding it unsteady but workable, then folded the rest into drawers. Next came the toiletries, which he gathered into a toiletry bag and carried up one flight to Bathroom 2 in the attic, staking out a spot on the middle shelf above the kind before returning.
With the practical things done, he unpacked the handful of objects that made a place feel his. His battered sketchbook with half-finished drawings, a cheap plastic desk fan, his laptop and tangles charger, a framed photo of his sister, and a small potted plant with a stubborn will to live.
He placed the plant of the chest of drawers so it could drink in whatever light filtered through the window. The photo went on the bedside unit, angled towards the pillow. His laptop bag slid under the bed for now, and the fan took its place on the corner of the chest, ready for summer nights.
Only once everything had been placed did the shape of the room start making sense. A narrow space that felt like it had been carved from the spine of the house, but warm enough to call his own. The sloping ceiling created a sense of shelter, and the pale wood floor, despite its wear, glowed under the afternoon light.
As he knelt to plug his charger into a socket near the skirting board, a faint creak echoed somewhere beneath him. Not sharp or sudden, just a mild shift, like an old house stretching its joints. Elliot paused, hand hovering over the plug, listening. No footsteps followed. No voices. No doors closing. Just the soft, neutral quiet of a building that had held many tenants before him.
He inserted the plug, stood, and brushed his hands on his jeans.
The room felt… expectant, as if it were holding its breath along with him, waiting to see how things would unfold.
He sat on the edge of the bed, let the mattress dip beneath him, and studies the way the light fell across his new space. Imperfect, dusty, a little cramped, but his.
“Alright,” he murmured into the stillness, as if speaking to the room itself. “Let’s give this a try”.
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